Wednesday, 9 November 2016

fire works are cool

                       

                  I belev that fire works are good  
          you have to be a be dome to not 
          them.


           
                 I was a Saturday night fire works was on
                 I was getting ready   to go.

          I love fire works because it gets your family
         together to celebrate   it.

         you can hang out with your friends and have
         a good time.

          they entertain people and make them come
         back.
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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous10 November 2016 at 16:34

    i like it but all you spaces are to big and your words spelt wrong and missing letters you should fix it upanyway good job

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