Zion was shouting to Johnny saying
"get your luggage and your stuff together" and stack it in the hippy van.We are going to Taupo Bay. Johnny said,OK.
Two hours later they were on there way to Taupo Bay. Happily driving their Zion noticed the gas was low. Johnny,said
"ow no we will have to stop at a gas station" Zion said "but there is no gas"
stash ion out weir we are.After a while Johnny,
Zion and there van ran out of gas.Johnny slammed on the gas but van wouldn't go Johnny tried again but wouldn't move.
As they got out of the van Zion siperly noticed
a little gas stash ion yay yay yay a gas station
with out thinking Zion ran in to the gas little gas
and asked the man at the counter how mush is a
can of gas the man at the counter said $5 so Zion
brought it and ran back to the van and he put it in the
van drove off. the end
"ow no we will have to stop at a gas station" Zion said "but there is no gas"
stash ion out weir we are.After a while Johnny,
Zion and there van ran out of gas.Johnny slammed on the gas but van wouldn't go Johnny tried again but wouldn't move.
As they got out of the van Zion siperly noticed
a little gas stash ion yay yay yay a gas station
with out thinking Zion ran in to the gas little gas
and asked the man at the counter how mush is a
can of gas the man at the counter said $5 so Zion
brought it and ran back to the van and he put it in the
van drove off. the end
Now you've got the start with all the facts so now try to include details about how Johnny is feeling
ReplyDeleteCool story Fredz, I love reading what you write.....What's some of the things Johnny would be feeling, think about how you would feel if you ran out of gas!!!
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