At rugby
I got up at six in the morning to get geared up for rugby in waipapa. I got ready to go and just as I finished off my brekkie I heard dads car pull up. He was picking me up to take me up there to meet up with my team. When we got there dad said " quick we've got four minutes before the game starts"!! One of my team mates said "pass the ball over here".
It was the other teams turn to start the game, they kicked off and I managed to catch it, I ran as fast as I could for the line and was nearly there when someone tackled me and I went down witha thud. Of course I dropped the ball BUT luckily my team mate grabbed it, ran for the line and scored!!!!
Woohoo woohoo woohoo..........that's teamwork!!!!!!
Wow Freddy, this is very detailed and you've also stuck to the main ideas so your audience can follow your writing with ease. Clear and organised.
ReplyDeleteWow Freddy, this is very detailed and you've also stuck to the main ideas so your audience can follow your writing with ease. Clear and organised.
ReplyDeletenice story freddy really liked how u described it
ReplyDeleteThis story is exactly how it happened that day too!!! Great use of detail Fredz
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